I know...I already submitted this....WRONG! Wahaha. Ok yeah sorta. But after staring at Yorda for a few mins they day after I finished the picture, all the problems with it started to drive me nuts. I juts HAD to fix it. So I did fix most of the major problems...mainly proportions. The proportions were very off in the first one. I fixed the legs. Made her more slender...as she is..very slender. FIXED THE FREAKING GRASS! Yeah the grass was terrible the first time around...I half-assed it because I was tired. But I realized..after putting all that work into the rest of the picture, half-assing one part ruins the whole. So I put more effort into it. Layed down several different grass colors, then scribbled over them with all the same colors..starting from darkest to lightest. Then I blurred the whole thing. Sharpened the closest grass to give that distancey feel. And made the picture a bit taller to fit Yorda's new hieght. One thing I didnt fix because I cant seem to figure it out is the hand...kinda bothering me the way it doesnt show up too well. I also removed the "ghosty" dress trim. Although thats actually what Yorda's dress does...in terms of shadow and light I thought it better to keep the edge sharp. And there you have it. The final version of Yorda
well i think this looks beautiful,
you got just the right tones to her outfit and skin, and that's difficult to do for Yorda but you pulled it off.
Fantastic piece *hugs for a job well done*
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Please can i use it as a sign in a forum ?
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you got just the right tones to her outfit and skin, and that's difficult to do for Yorda but you pulled it off.
Fantastic piece *hugs for a job well done*
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It's beautiful.
Simply beautiful.