I know...I already submitted this....WRONG! Wahaha. Ok yeah sorta. But after staring at Yorda for a few mins they day after I finished the picture, all the problems with it started to drive me nuts. I juts HAD to fix it. So I did fix most of the major problems...mainly proportions. The proportions were very off in the first one. I fixed the legs. Made her more slender...as she is..very slender. FIXED THE FREAKING GRASS! Yeah the grass was terrible the first time around...I half-assed it because I was tired. But I realized..after putting all that work into the rest of the picture, half-assing one part ruins the whole. So I put more effort into it. Layed down several different grass colors, then scribbled over them with all the same colors..starting from darkest to lightest. Then I blurred the whole thing. Sharpened the closest grass to give that distancey feel. And made the picture a bit taller to fit Yorda's new hieght. One thing I didnt fix because I cant seem to figure it out is the hand...kinda bothering me the way it doesnt show up too well. I also removed the "ghosty" dress trim. Although thats actually what Yorda's dress does...in terms of shadow and light I thought it better to keep the edge sharp. And there you have it. The final version of Yorda
OOOO! Wow! There she is, all finished up! That looks splendid buddy.
The feeling of oneness with nature I get from looking at the picture is nice. ^______________^ Tho, it's also like, she is detacting herself from something, sort of, if that makes any sense.
The bg turned out great I see. I was wondering what would be placed under her feet, grass is just great for bare foot walking, so I like that and it also looks convincing, there's many blades of it and hued to give each one more show, more life for the picture. The rocks and the seeeeea, that's kinda what I'm stuck on with one of my pictures, hahaha, that one I showed to you, it'll look like that, however a little different of course. You handled it well.
I didn't notice this before, but she looks a little bit like KH Kairi.
Wow, this is amazing! Everything just... flows together. The color choice and the mood of the picture... it just wows me. It's beautiful. What did you use to color this? Painter? Photoshop? Or was it by hand?
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The feeling of oneness with nature I get from looking at the picture is nice. ^______________^ Tho, it's also like, she is detacting herself from something, sort of, if that makes any sense.
The bg turned out great I see. I was wondering what would be placed under her feet, grass is just great for bare foot walking, so I like that and it also looks convincing, there's many blades of it and hued to give each one more show, more life for the picture. The rocks and the seeeeea, that's kinda what I'm stuck on with one of my pictures, hahaha, that one I showed to you, it'll look like that, however a little different of course. You handled it well.
I didn't notice this before, but she looks a little bit like KH Kairi.
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